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Barbara Ardinger, Ph.D. www.barbaraardinger.com , will read two or three works, 10 to 15 pages each, for 10 to 12 twelve authors in sessions of 15 to 20 minutes each. She will comment on “gooder English” (spelling punctuation, syntax), logical development, dialogue, and overall readability.

As a published author (eight books, plus innumerable blogs and book reviews) herself, she has worked with something like 300 authors like you—really smart people who want to express themselves more successfully in writing. She has edited screenplays, children's books, academic discourse (textbooks and doctoral and master's theses), web site text, and some poetry. Fiction edited includes romance, action-adventure, science fiction, western, mystery, historical, speculative, and horror novels. Nonfiction edited includes philosophy (mostly mainstream metaphysics and New Age), Calvinist theology, holistic health, science and technology, political tracts, business topics, history, and memoirs and biography. Barbara wants to help you produce the best book possible.


D.H. Brady will will read up to four manuscript excerpts of apx. 2,500 words. She edits on all levels necessary, including copy, line, stylistic, substantive, and developmental, and will provide commentary in regard to the suggested corrections/changes. She will also comment on such elements as diction, emotional impact, clarity, economy, internal logic, structure, character development, pace, flow, etc. 

She will spend as many as twenty minutes in the consultation. She has special expertise in fiction and nonfiction genres/categories including fantasy, young adult, literary fiction, romance, and creative nonfiction, as well as American Indian and other indigenous cultures, self-help, how-to, ESL projects, ecology, psychology, spirituality, and complementary medicine. If available, please include a brief synopsis or outline in addition to the sample -- which should be the first chapter, or the introduction or prologue and first chapter -- to provide an idea of structure.


Marcie Geffner will read up to ten authors' submissions of approximately 2500 words (10 standard pages), fiction only, general or in any genre.

Feedback can be frightening for any author—but not when you choose Marcie Geffner as your critique editor. An experienced journalist, book-editor and writer, Marcie offers authors professional and honest insights, guidance, craft notes, writing tips and more. Her comprehensive critiques include a full developmental and line edit of up to 10 pages (2,500 words), a summary of what's working and what needs to be improved, and an individual, private and personalized consultation of up to 30 minutes at the conference. Authors will also receive a copy of their critique via email after the consultation and can ask questions via email about any comments they want clarified after the conference. Authors of all levels writing fiction, memoir and nonfiction are welcome to submit.

Marcie especially enjoys working with aspiring writers, though all levels are welcome.


Art Holcomb will read screenplays, novels, short stories and comic book/graphic novel scripts - up to 10 manuscripts of approximately 2500 words (10 standard pages) and provide written notes and a twenty minute scheduled consultation.  Please read the bio on Art for more information about his experience and qualifications.

Follow-up consultations after the conference can be arranged separately is desired.


ART HOLCOMB is a screenwriter, playwright, fiction writer and comic book creator who began his writing career at age 13 when one of his plays was professionally performed by the American Conservatory Theater.

He has published poetry, essays and short stories and has written more than 50 comic book stories for franchises such as THE X-MEN, as well as original and licensed properties for Defiant, Valiant, Acclaim, Big Entertainment, FUNimation, Marvel Comics, and DC Comics.  His screen work has appeared on UPN, the Sci-Fi Channel and the SHOWTIME Channel.

He has sold to the STAR TREK television franchise at Paramount Television and worked on projects for the estates of Gene Roddenberry and legendary actor Steve McQueen. He has also written for the critically acclaimed animation series SHADOW RAIDERS, as well as consulted for video game companies, film production companies and publishing houses.

He is a regular columnist for Creative Screenwriting Magazine, called “The Best Magazine for Screenwriters” by The Los Angeles Times.  He is a regular contributor on fiction and screenwriting to STORYFIX.COM, ranked one of the top fiction writing sites on the internet by Writer’s Digest Magazine.

Art is a sought-after lecturer on story and runs a consultancy for highly motivated screenwriters and novelists who are committed to moving their careers to the next professional level.

His most recent short story is The Perfect Bracket with acclaimed novelist Howard V. Hendrix, which will appear in ANALOG Magazine in the spring of 2015. A play by the same name is currently under consideration for production by the National Actor’s Theatre in Louisville, Kentucky.  A new science fiction – treasure hunt novel (with co-writer Hendrix) entitled The Strewn is scheduled for completion in 2015.

You can read more of Art’s thoughts on the craft of writing at www.artholcomb.blogspot.com

hsLisa Marguerite Mora (Barrington Editorial Services) will read up to six novel manuscripts of approximately 2500 words (10 standard pages). She edits literary fiction, short story and memoirs.  She focused on general flow with attention to structure/plot and some line editing if it is an issue. She will comment on what she likes, what she notices, what took her out, where she needed clarity. She will provide up to twenty minutes depending on the need.


Peggy Glenn will read up to 10 fiction or non-fiction manuscript excerpts of approximately 2,500 words, in printed format. If available, please include a brief synopsis or story outline in addition to the sample to provide an idea of structure and context. Your submitted sample is ideally the first chapter, or the introduction or prologue and first chapter.

Peggy provides the following levels of editing in her Wordsmithing Service: copy, line, stylistic, substantive, and developmental. She will provide feedback commensurate with the depth of material that you provide. She will also provide feedback on dialogue, emotional impact, clarity, word economy, plot logic, structure, character development, story pace, etc. She will spend approximately 20 minutes in consultation during the conference, depending on the level of work that you submit.

Fiction preferences include: fictionalized memoir, mysteries, “slice of life” stories, and believable historical fiction, particularly with a romantic twist.

Non-fiction preferences include: memoir, first-person accounts, true crime that does not involve gore, inspirational and self-help (non-metaphysical), and self-improvement. She will read science fiction if it’s not scientific or horrific. No vampires, past-life, erotica or westerns. She also provides project coaching with gentle and honest feedback and lots of encouragement.

hs Kathy Ide will read up to ten submissions of up to ten double-spaced pages, fiction or nonfiction. Kathy specializes in Christian manuscripts but will critique any material that does not go against Christian principles or a Christian world view.

Her critiques include comments on the overall content, professional writing techniques that can improve the manuscript, and proofreading for typos, inconsistencies, and errors in punctuation, usage, grammar, and spelling (according to the industry-standard reference guides). Kathy will spend 15-20 minutes in one-on-one consultation at the conference. Writers of all levels are welcome.

hs Marla Markman is the editor and project manager at Markman Editorial Services, specializes in guiding authors through the often-daunting self-publishing process, from manuscript to print/e-book. Her clients have gone on to win numerous awards, including a 2012 National Indie Excellence Award, a 2012 Global eBook Award, and a 2011 International Book Award. Marla will read up to six manuscript excerpts of approx. 2,500 words. She edits all levels, including copy, substantive, and developmental, and will consult on such elements as organization, tone, structure, flow, what works and what doesn’t, and suggest ideas for adding valuable features, such as sidebars and worksheets, that attract readers and increase sales.

She will spend as many as 20 minutes in the consultation. She has expertise in many nonfiction genres, including self-help, business, finance, legal, travel, health and wellness, historical, memoir, and cookbooks. Please include a table of contents, a brief synopsis or outline in addition to the sample, which should be the first chapter, or the introduction and first chapter.


Meghan Pinson of My Two Cents Editing  and Outrider Literary specializes in novels and nonfiction books.

Through My Two Cents Editing, she and her associate editors offer expert editing and manuscript critique services. Meghan partnered with Sunny Cooper of Follow the Buffalo in 2014 to develop Outrider Literary, a consulting and project-management agency that guides authors through the publication process.

She will meet up to five writers for at least fifteen minutes each to discuss excerpts submitted in advance.


Former Big Five Editor, Helga Schier, Ph.D. is the founder and owner of withpenandpaper.com, an independent editorial services firm. With over 20 years of experience in the (self-)publishing industry, Ms. Schier guides authors through the development and revision process. Handling a manuscript like a diamond in the rough, Ms. Schier’s editorial work focuses on the refinement of story, character, and stylistic issues, helping writers unlock the potential of their manuscripts. Her clients are published, self-published, and not-yet-published writers.

Ms. Schier has published essayistic works on contemporary English and American fiction, and has translated several screenplays, memoirs, and a novel series. She is also a frequent speaker at writers’ conferences with successful lectures on topics such as Top Ten Mistakes Writers Make, and The Three Secrets to Successful Indie Publishing, and High Readability – What Is It and How Do I Get It?

Helga will read and edit (discussing content as well as style and language flow) up to 2500 words of up to ten manuscripts, and offer individual consultations of up to 20 minutes each. In addition, Helga will be available for follow-up questions at her company’s table (withpenandpaper.com) throughout the conference. Helga will read all types of fiction, memoir, and narrative Nonfiction.

Mike Robinson will read up to ten manuscripts of approximately 2500 words (10 standard pages) in the Science Fiction, Thriller, Spiritual / Metaphysical and Literary categories.

He will provide both line editing (language flow, style, grammar, syntax) and developmental editing (plot and character logic, story structure). You won't find any MFA or Embittered Teacher Dogma here: possessing a bit of an experimental streak, he knows there are many, many ways a story can work, and so seeks to fully understand and appreciate the author's intention(s), and to edit within that framework to do justice to the original vision.


Christine Van Zandt,Christine Van Zandt, owner of Write for Success, is a published author (fiction and nonfiction) and an experienced editor in Hollywood.  She will conduct a thorough reading, providing thoughtful and practical feedback.  Her areas of expertise include Memoir, Parenting, Fictionalized Memoir, Science Fiction, Fantasy, Paranormal, Mystery, Suspense, Action, LBGT, Romance, and Erotica.  In addition, she has edited all categories of Children’s from Children’s Picture Books to Young Adult.  A particularly active category recently has been the new genre New Adult that captures the YA audience as they enter their twenties.  Christine also specializes in authors whose first language is not English.

Christine works with self-publishing, agented, and freelancing authors.  For more information and client testimonials, please see www.write-for-success.com.

She will read up to twenty submissions of up to 2,500 words each and will provide an in-person consultation of fifteen minutes, which includes written feedback.  Opening chapters preferred.  Please indicate genre of the piece and total word count.  Submissions other than books are also welcome.  Her feedback will encompass the storyline as well as grammar and style.


Dan Watanabe will read up to 10 manuscripts of approximately 2500 words (10 standard pages). Mr. Watanabe was a studio executive who "green lit" movies for 15 years and currently teaches at Los Angeles Valley College.

He will edit screenplays for ProCritiques and provide up to twenty minutes of personal consultation, depending on the need.


Robert Yehling is the editor of "The Hummingbird Review" literary journal and "Innovation & Technology Today" magazine. He also has edited more than 130 books, many that were picked up or contracted by major publishers (Warner, Sourcebooks, Houghton Mifflin, St. Martin's Press, Random House, IT Books, etc.).

He works with travel narrative, spiritual subjects, business, leadership, poetry/essays, memoir, sports, topical Nonfiction, biographies, music, self-help and health/wellness/fitness Nonfiction; and mainstream, literary, genre-based, fantasy, mysteries, and crime novels (no horror).

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